Production meeting (Backlog)

Me and Bianca are experiencing a few problems with the story line now we're editing it. Firstly it's far too long and doesn't fit in the with the maximum two and a half minutes we have to cut it down by. Also the story line has a lot of things going on and it's fairly hard to follow - it's more like a movie in two minutes then an OTS. The camera work on the scene he gets poisoned and dies isn't very framing and not following 'Rule of Thirds.' So we've decided to cut the scene where we poison him and change it to when he walks out of the door into the garden expecting to question/arrest us we've vanished, with the camera focusing on the knocked over drinks and the gate slamming, not only does this save us time but it's more of an OTS now as we can say the movie is going to be him trying to find us.